Sunday, February 22, 2009

TROUBLE ON THE HORIZON - Chapter 1

TROUBLE ON THE HORIZON - Chapter 1
By Diane Dery Coutu
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A week earlier – “Not again,” he'd heard it several times in the past. But now with it coming straight from his father's mouth it really upset him, flapping his arms upwards. “Tell me this is just another of those scams to get one of the good guys again.” Damien was mad as hell. “How is it possible with everything that's gone on? For sure there must be some mistake.”

His father was shaking his head.

“After three years they are still coming out of the woodwork.” Damien continued.

When his half brother died, there were women coming out of nowhere, claiming that his half-brother was the father of their baby. As Raphael's brother, Damien was very hopeful but as a lawyer. He knew he had to take things into his own hands. And so he sent the women to be tested. Unfortunately, the tests came back negative, which made Damien stop believing.

It saddened Damien terribly; though he occasionally saw, on one side the raw side of the people. On the other hand; he was happy, he had used his lawyer talents to the hilt. It had saddened his loving father so much knowing that people would do anything for money. Damien knew his father would have loved having a grandchild, but Damien wasn't ready to be a father. Besides his father, his private practice was his family.

His father Raphael Senior shook his head, “Nope..., there is no going on about it; this one is for real. It seems that while your brother was undercover, he slept with the young lady in question. And it seems it happened more than once.”

“How, did she find us?” Damien grumbled.

Raphael tried his best to smooth out their conversation, for he knew how this would affect his son. “She’d done some work for the police force and they got in contact with me.”

Damien balled his fist and was going to hit the wall of the den with all his power; then he changed his mind, he just missed it by millimetres. His common sense took over, before his brain could register the onslaught of pain, which would have brought him nothing but more pain. But of the more physical proportion this time. Let alone the fact that his father would not appreciate his son making holes in the wall. Not to mention plastering blood all over the place.

Letting out an exasperated sigh, Damien asked. “Why is she letting us know about his child now, three years after the fact?”

Raphael let out a sigh. “It seems that her son is sick. And she, Anita doesn't want to go through the sorted thing alone. Also she wanted Ralph to know some of his immediate family.”

Damien could feel himself softening; if the boy is his half-brother's son, then he will do all he can for him. But if he isn't he will drag her, Miss Anita through the Courts. “Has there been any testing done?” Damien asked hunching his shoulders.

“It seems that yes there has. The reason it took so long to reach us was due to the fact that, your brother used an anonymous name. Which delayed her reaching us before now. That and the fact that she helped the local law enforcement take down the new gang. That your brother was working on dismantling.”

Damien knew only too well, after all Ralph was his half-brother Raphael Walters Star Jr., Raphael Seniors ex-wife Gabrielle Walters was a strong willed high-class, high-strung lady and insisted he have her name also. Raphael Jr. liked that thought, often thanking his mother for her fore thinking. Due to her he was able to have a name that he could use while undercover.

Even though on paper his name was Raphael Walters Star Jr. On the job and with his friends he was known as Raphael Star. He found it more respectable as a policeman. He liked using the name Ralph Walters, when they played cowboys and Indians when they were young. Ralph found that name sounded respectable like a Texas Ranger favorite of his, named Ranger Walker played by Chuck Norris. This thought brought a smile to Damien’s face. His brother was one sweet cookie; he knew how to make people laugh.

Damien’s father smiled his famous crooked smile. “It seems, in the beginning she had some difficulty convincing the head of the police force, of her knowing what your brother was doing. And that her knowing what had happened to kill her twin brother and her lover; was not due to herself, but to her brother’s legacy. By bringing the Cartel down she had proved on whose side she was on. It seems they were very much in love, your brother and her. And she would do anything in memory of your brother. The one and only love she ever expects to have.” Sadness came over him, as he said these last words.

Damien snickered at his father’s last comment.

Raphael continued. “But now with what happened, she is alone with no family to speak of. You can imagine none of the rest of her family wants anything to do with her. She is considered a danger to all; so that is why she's turned to us.”

Damien looked at his father. “What is the name of her child and what is the supposed sickness?”

“The child’s name is Ralph Handel Walters’s son of Anita Handel and your brother. As of the sickness he has; it is Hemophilia A.”

Damien looked at his father, eyes nearly bulging out of his head as he raised his eyebrows. “In english please.”

Raphael’s shoulders slumped. “Factor VIII deficiency.”

“Oh God,” Damien’s hand flew to his forehead. His father’s head was bobbing in his familiar way. They knew that Ralph was a carrier because on his mother’s side there where several casualties of the disease. Raphael jr. was lucky to have been born without it. But unfortunately his son had inherited the dreaded disease. Just that softened his heart towards his possible nephew. “When are they due to arrive?” Damien thought to ask.

“In about a week’s time,” Damien’s father answered his question. “We should be able to come to some arrangement about how to house them. I thought for the time being seeing as her son is so young, we could put them both in your brother’s room. That way she can see to his every needs and not be worried as to her son’s whereabouts. We just have to take the desk and resting chair out. Put in a baby bed and a rocking chair that should be enough to start with.”

Damien realized, his father had everything planned out.

“Surely with the walk-in closet they don’t need a place to put the baby clothes, but we’ll see to that when the time comes.”

Damien found it fascinating how his father often talked out loud to himself, when he had an unresolved significant problem.

“When do you plan to do the changes?” Damien asked as he walked towards the door.

“Oh, sometime during the coming week, I guess” His father was at it again, often reverting inwards when he was in deep thought just giving out fragmented answers. So Damien left him to his wandering thoughts.

He had his own things to look into. And one of them was asking his friend Carl, in the police force to investigate any and all that he could on Miss Anita Handel. Looking into recent cases he came across some papers that had to do with acquaintances of the lady in question. Or at least if not acquaintances they seemed to come from the same neck of the world.

From what he remembered about the case his half-brother was on. It had to do with a whole new Cartel that wanted to invade that downtown district, some hundred miles away. And they where eliminating all rivalry, which was just as bad as the street gang, jail mates who wanted to take over the prison system and become one gang.

Something that really riled Damien was the fact that his elder half brother was killed in a cross fire. But Damien had the impression that it was all planned down to the last bullet. For everything had come to a complete stand still after what had happened to them. Of course Frederick Handel, Anita's twin brother, had been killed only moments before Ralph had been killed, but at the time Damien had only thoughts of his brother and no one else.

Now he was going to have the woman who was in part responsible for what happened to his brother, around him every moment he would be home. How was he going to stay in the same room with that woman and not be down her throat every second, he was able? He has nothing but rage for the woman who blindsided his brother with love, and who now was no more.

He knew his father wouldn’t accept it if he came home later then usual. He’d suspect that Damien did not accept her; which he didn’t of course, at least not until he had proof. But he thought better of it and decided the only way to make sure she didn’t take advantage of them, would be to let her know he was on to her if she tried something. So maybe it was best to arrive around the same time as usual.

The Star men fixed the room so that it would be somewhat comfortable. At least a guy would think it was. “As for the decorating, she can do it herself!” Damien mumbled out loud. Raphael Seniors nodded his approval. Damien didn’t plan on doing anything more than was politely necessary. He still wanted to keep his brothers spirit in the room as long as possible.

Raphael Senior went back to writing his memoirs. Since he could remember he wanted to write about things that had happened. And since his sons death for some reason his wanting had become a necessity he could no longer put off. It helped him live through his pain. Pain seemed to have become a part of his personal life in the last few years; until two years ago when he met Kate.

First the loss of his second wife Sandra and how she died rather suddenly eight years earlier. The doctors said she must have been in pain for quite a while. Because when she accepted to go for help, it was far too late the cancer had spread beyond any help. Before that he was a scholar who taught in the local college. But after his wife’s death he stopped teaching.

Raphael remembered those days when she was tired. He thought it might have been her pre-menopausal starting. Sandra said she had no idea, that she was just tired and that surely it would let up. But it hadn’t, now he wished he’d pushed her into seeing a doctor sooner. Back then he thought she was right. By the time he did insist it was too late. She had passed away in a matter of months.

He was probably hard to live with, but he still had his two sons. And now three years after his eldest son was killed. He was going to meet his first and only grandchild. He had every intention of making their life as pleasant as was possible. Two losses in less then ten years were way too much.

Now he felt a need to laugh, and let loose for some pure pleasure for he had mourned way too long now. He was going to get to know his Grandson Ralph. A smile came to his lips. If he’s anything like his father I’ll have my hands full. He’d have to buy himself one of those new numeric cameras his friends talked about. Also create a sandbox like Katie had for her granddaughter. Raphael noted that he would have to ask Katie what a child needed these days. The things he remembered from when his kids where young: toys, food, bathing articles, bed. Ah, he’d ask his friends advice. Raphael smiled as he sat himself down and began writing.

Word had gotten around that Raphael Jr. had a lover three years prior. Damien tried to keep it as quiet as possible. But his friend Carl had left the contents of his discoveries on his desk. And somehow it got around that Damien had a nephew who would come and visit. Damien wasn’t at all sure he believed what was written on paper. So many women came with the same claim. It was hard to believe that at long last the family name would continue. He thought that the whole idea had fallen on his shoulders. But it seems that he would be able to preserve his life as a single man, now that his nephew was in the picture.

Damien started to wonder what he looked like. Did he have any resemblance to his step brother, or did he have traits that were more from her side of the family? If it would have been left up to him, he would have let her rent an apartment. But then on second thought; being in the house would make it easier for him to see what kind of woman she really was. If she had a mean streak he wouldn’t have any qualms in taking his nephew away from her.

Somehow the thought of her coming from a Cartel put her on the wrong side of the law, even if she herself had done no wrong. At least with his nephew in his house, he may have saved him from a life as a criminal. He reasoned he’d do his best to keep him on the good side of the law.

Saturday, January 31, 2009

TROUBLE ON THE HORIZON -- contemporary Romance -- Prologue

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TROUBLE ON THE HORIZON
By Diane Dery Coutu


Prologue

A shadow was approaching her at a violent rate. She kept turning her head from left to right. At her back was a grayish brick wall, the one she finally realized reminded her of their house that she sold two years earlier. What was it? Why was it after her? What can she do to get away?

Why wasn't she frightened, and yet it felt like she was. The whole thing seemed surreal. Then she blacks out. She is so tired of those nightmares. The specialist said that it was just her memory, cutting out what was too painful. Due to what she had been through and that with time it would either go away. Or she would finally get the answer she was seeking. The last one became a reality.

Not giving herself time for tears. Anita stretched as she woke up; it hurt too much to remember what she’d been through, in the last three years. She could hear Ralph in the next room. “I’m coming loves, I’m coming.”

After brushing her hair to tame it somewhat and getting dressed she slipped on a pair of flip-flops. Then she elegantly waddled over and entered her son’s room, he smiled at her in greeting. It felt so good to be free of all responsibilities. Except for the one she had towards her son Ralph. He resembled her in so many ways it was uncanny. She picked him up and elegantly waddled to the changing table, to change his diaper.

Anita always had nice slightly wavy sandy blond hair and it was her lush lips and gold speckled eyes that she inherited from her mother that made people look at her twice.

Having gone to a private school, when she was younger one thing that she’d learned was even if you had some extra pounds on your person, you should always walk with grace. All young ladies had to learn to walk with a book on their heads. She had no choice but to learn some of the finer things in school, because her father was a bigwig, before his death.

Being a part of a huge Cartel had its good side, but also it's bad side. Like the death of her beloved lover and her twin brother. Now three years later. All of the street gang and her family members, who had something to do with their deaths, were in prison.

She felt a little better since she got her revenge. Moreover, she did it in an honest way in her brother’s memory. She wanted the family way to be in the past. Now after having discovered a few things about her lover, she was finally going to find her lovers family. Hopefully, she would get some support from them to help raise her son.

By now she was used to his illness. She'd looked up as much information as possible, so that she would be ready if anything ever happened. She knew it did not come from her side of the family. So the only possibility was that it came from his father's side. She was hoping they could help clarify that for her.

She had known her lover for over a year, but they only became close a little while before his death. The only possibility was that he was a carrier: Hemophilia A. Due to a defective gene that is passed on to other generations. A defective gene found on an x chromosome was responsible. There were several kinds and his was type A.

“Hey little munchkin what do you feel up to doing today? Mommy is free to go for a walk in the park what do you say to that?” Anita smiled at his antics. She loved it when he clapped his hands in approval; it meant he was in a good mood. “One day left; and we will be with your Granddad and Uncle Damien. Remember they are your father’s brother and father.” She preferred repeating things like that to get him used to their names. Hoping he would feel comfortable when it came to meeting them.

She finished wiping him up, put on a fresh diaper and dressed him with the clothes she had taken out the night before. “There you go, are you hungry?” He clapped his hands again. She kissed him on the cheek. “You are a cheeky little Angel, you.” They had their usual breakfast of cereal and toast. Ralph had his juice and Anita had her coffee.

The few things Anita had left to pack could wait until Ralph was down for his nap. So they took off. Thanks to her friend Gina; Anita was able to give the bulky baby carriage to her friend's beloved sister who was expecting another child, but still had a few months to go. Her friend said she needed one because her first child was now five years old.

Anita figured she could buy another smaller one when she got to Horizon. She didn't mind giving it away because she knew her friend's sister was doing everything she could to save money. Anita knew life wasn't easy when you had to scrape for everything. Personally she hadn't had to worry about it, but her brother had known of such things and helped people out whenever possible. Not many people liked bulky baby carriages. So she figured it was easier to give it away.

Gina was a friend of long date, and knew everything that Anita had gone through. Gina was so happy that her friend had met the man of her life. Anita had a great twin brother, too bad he wanted to be a priest because she favored him greatly.

Though when she found out he was going to be the head of the family, she'd decided to try to get to know him better. She was sure that she was making headway, when the whole horrible thing happened. She couldn't tell her friend about her own feelings; for her twin brother, she thought it was best to keep quiet until their relationship had altered, though she cried with Anita at the funeral.

Ralph loved the swings, Anita swung him as high up as she dared and held Ralph while he slid down the slide a few times, he seemed to be having so much fun. She preferred not trying the slide for she felt she would probably get stuck. It was a good thing she brought with her one of the plastic glasses specially made for young children so that he wouldn't spill his drink all over the place.

Because of it, she was able to provide him something to drink, seeing as he developed the hiccups again. She was happy he didn't ask for the bottle anymore it made life a little easier. Soon she would have to start potty training. First she would let him get used to his new life before incorporating something new. Once he feels comfortable with his Grandfather and Uncle it should be pretty easy, she thought.

It was going on noon when they returned to her two bedroom apartment. She was looking forward to meeting her lover’s family, even though she was a little apprehensive. She figured it was probably expected. Their meal consisted of roughly mashed cooked veggies making it easier for Ralph to eat with hamburger mixed in. Finger food for her baby; who for some reason he seemed to prefer feeling his food before eating it. “You had a fun morning, honey?” She tickled his chin. He opened his mouth and yawned.

“Oh, a yawn poor you, you’re tired!” Anita didn’t mind putting him down even though he hadn’t quite finished his meal. “Come on honey it’s time for a nap.” She cleaned him off; he was so cute when he slept, a real little angel.

Anita hoped that they would all get along. As she went to leave the room she turned around, stood over his bed watching him sleep. Her shoulder leaning against the wall she crossed her arms over her ample bosom, biting her bottom lip as she watched him sleep in his crib. All she knew about them was that Uncle Damien was a lawyer. And that Ralph's Grandfather was not working, but she had no idea why.

Raphael Star was going to meet them at the bus station. I wonder how I will recognize him. Anita started to feel a little on edge. Come on you’ve been through hell these last three years, this is going to be a piece of cake.

She felt a bit better; a little self motivation didn't hurt. Closing the door as she exited his room, then she got to work putting her few remaining things in her luggage to bring with her.

She'd decided on more finger food, for their last meal of the day. Tomorrow they would have toast and cereal she'd give him his favorite -- Honey and Nuts -- Cheerios. It would be easy to place his bowl in with the luggage, so he would have something familiar in the new place. She'd bring his glass in her purse if ever he was thirsty, he'd have it.

Ralph woke around two that afternoon, giving them time to go say a last good-bye to the few friends they had. When they got back home Anita put Ralph on the living room floor, letting him play with his toys while she prepared the supper. Chicken fingers, French fries and green string beans from a can. Once his meal was cut up in bite size pieces and cooled down. Anita sat him in the high chair; she'd borrowed from Gina's sister. Washed his hands with a facecloth she always had ready and let him go at it.

She relished looking at him eat; it often reminded her of his father's hands on, way of eating. Once they were finished eating, she washed his hands again. Put him back on the floor and let him play while she washed and put the dishes away. Ralph was sleepy again so she got them both ready for a goodnights sleep.

She had put her alarm clock for six AM. Hoping it would give her enough time, to be at the bus station for nine AM. After washing her face, she spread moisturizer put on her makeup. Then she got dressed and put her luggage close to the door. Having taken a bath the night before; she'd gotten in the habit of doing that, which saved time in the morning.

She went into Ralph's room; started humming, Ralph began to stir. “Hi munchkin, it's time to get up snoozing McDougan, snoozing McDougan, snoozing McDougan you've snoozed enough, la-la-la-la-la, LA-LA-LA-LA-LA, la-la-la-la-la. ” She was singing. Ralph liked it when she sang as she woke him up.

She gave him a bath, so he would start off fresh. Dressed him in a diaper and put him in the high chair. She was ready to dress him once he was finished eating. It was going on eight when her friend Gina arrived. “Hi,” she greeted Anita with a kiss and a hug. “Greetings to my favorite young man, are you ready?” He smiled and threw a piece of cereal at her. Catching it she put it in her mouth, petting his head and thanking him. She turned back to Anita, “I'm going to miss you.”

They hugged. “Once I know the phone number I’ll let you know.” Anita smiled.

“If you have any problems you’ll let me know. I’ll help you.” Anita nodded placed a piece of paper with the address of where she was going. And her apartment keys in Gina’s hands so that her friend could come back and get the things that were destined for her sister.

Gina took the luggage down to the used car it was easy because the luggage was on wheels. Anita stayed in the apartment getting her boy ready for the bus ride that would take a little more than one hour.

Anita hoped that Gina would soon find herself a boy friend. She got the impression that she was interested in her brother. But Anita was so into her own bubble it was something, she didn’t think to give much thought to. She’d just noticed little actions every once in awhile, but never paid much attention.

When Gina took the time to pamper herself, she was good looking. She'd proved it a few times during the holidays, but for some reason she preferred looking like plain Jane. Anita was sure she would find someone once she started taking better care of herself.

She was of a petit frame some two inches smaller than herself. Blond straight hair, sky blue eyes, soft mannered some ten pounds over her normal weight. But still nicely proportioned, Anita just realized she never heard her swear; surely a dream for any man with a brain.

At the bus stop they got the luggage into the boot under the bus. It was a good thing they didn’t have a lot of luggage, for there were a lot of people getting on the bus. Some men, but mostly like her, mothers with their children of different ages. Anita and Gina hugged one last time. “Now take good care of mommy, Ralph.” She kissed him on the cheek and smiled, her eyes watering over. “Don’t forget me.” Gina sniffed.

“Don’t worry; there is no possibility of that ever happening. Maybe you could come and visit some time?” Anita felt her eyes smart.

“Maybe, we’ll see.” Gina began to back away as people got on the bus. They waved one last time, and then Gina turned and left.





Friday, January 2, 2009

Happy New 2009

To all of my readers I would like to wish you a happy New Year, with the traditional, health, success, and prosperity wishes for the New Year. With health being the first for without health, there is not much else. Success will bring out the best. Prosperity will help you to retire early, what a great year I wish you all.
I’ve decided to create a few blogs to get the word out there in the world. The word, what word? In reality, it’s just a figure of speech. Now that I am a writer, there is a need to be seen to let people know that I have some great pieces of work to show them.
As well I thought it would be a good way to see how far I will be along in a few years from now. I find this to be a great way of learning how to understand more of the nitty-gritty of writing and research, as well as the marketing.
My latest piece of writing is a Romance fictional book.

‘Trouble on the Horizon’

The hero Damien Star a lawyer. From a small town named Horizon. He’d lost his beloved older half-brother Raphael Jr. an undercover cop three years prior. In a shooting involving Anita’s family, who lived some one hundred miles away.
Back then women were coming out of the woodwork. Claiming they were pregnant with his half-brothers child. Only the claims were unfounded. Now barely three years later the heroin Anita Handel proclaims that her child is his half-brothers child. Testing proved she was right.
Anita's twin brother wanted nothing to do with his father’s family business. Priesthood was his calling. By having been pushed into being the head of the family he was trying to change his cartel family into a family seeking out God. With a new gang rival trying to take over the town the younger cartels were refusing this turn about and decided to reach out where the money was. This in turn had caused her lover and twin brother's death.
Anita learned she was pregnant. For three years she worked with the police to put the gang rival and family members who participated in their demise away.
No longer having family she could trust. She wanted her two year old son to know at least some part of his immediate family. So she turned to her lover's family in hopes that if anything should happen to her. He would still have a close family member to hopefully take charge of him.
As Damien got to know Anita, he realized what he once thought was the perfect life was nothing more than -- an existence. Now with Anita and baby Ralph in his life he has finally found a reason for being, a reason to love. But trouble on the Horizon was seeking a way to destroy what was now his life -- his reason for being.
Monique a crazed woman from his past genuinely believed it was her right to be by Damien's side and decided she had waited long enough.
Then Monique created a precarious situation that brought about her demise, bringing Damien and Anita together again.

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